My Dialogue Story

Clarie's life

           

          "Hi, my name is Clarie and I'm going to tell you the story of my life," said Clarie. 

 No one knew where and when she was born. She lived at an orphanage near the countryside.   

            Her friends said, " Clarie is so not us, she didnt even know when her birthday was!"

She felt so sad,stressed and un-useful. She had ever commited suicide once, her 'mother' immediately ran to her .

           Her 'mom' shouted, " What are you doing, get down or you would be kicked out!"

I had no idea what i was doing and I went down so i didn't suicide. 

          My one and only ultimate best friend, Liviana said,"It was a relief you didn't jumped down."

          I grinned at her and said," Thanks for being my friend."

          Liviana answered, "No worries!"

         We were both friends for 5 years already. Our relationship became closer and she was like my own sibling. We shared all of our stories together, but 5 years at the orphanage was only fun with Liviana. One day, Liviana and I ran out from the orphanage and a truck came and hit Liviana, she fell down.

        Liviana said, "Clarie, don't mind me, go back to the orphanage, do your best, you are my best 

                               sister ever!"

Those were her last words for me.

        I said to her, " You will always be my friend and sister!" 

Those were my last words to her and I left her alone on the streets.

      Now, i felt i was dumb for leaving her like that. I believe Liviana will always see me from up there and wants the best for me. That was my last meeting with Liviana, now i am a succesful lawyer with a graceful heart. And my family that you should know, my beloved sister Liviana and me.

Punctuation and Capitalization

1.        Carolyn looked at her plate reluctantly, mashed potatoes with gravy cheese.
           She said: "I'm not eating that nasty lunch!"
           "If you don't like it, then don't eat it." said Samantha.
         She took a big spoon of her lunch.

2.       "Hi Tony,"
         Tony looked down at his shoes , dug in his toe , and pushed around a pile of dust.
           " Hey," he replied.
         Katy could tell something was wrong.

Sensory Details Writing

(The stories I wrote is all fiction stories)

Practice 1
1. There was a car on the street
= There was a shiny big new red car that smells like the 'new-car smell' and its engine's sound was really loud and it stopped near the gutter.

2. A cat was sitting on the roof
= There was a dull and dirty looking cat big old cat covered in brown soil and smelled like a rotten fish that was sitting on top of my friend's house's roof.

3. The little girl smiled at me
= A pretty,bright and gorgeous looking little girl that wore a really cute red hoodie and pink boots that smelled like roses smiled at me while i was queueing at the supermarket's cashier.

Practice 2

1.The car was dirty
= That day, my mom and I went to the mall by a car. The main road to the mall was crowded so we took the shortcut. I knew passing the shortcut would be a bad thing, so when we passed the shortcut, suddenly a lot of cars were queueing  to enter the mall too, the shortcut was worst than the main road, it was really soily , the car became so dirty, dirty like a pig that rolled on the soil. And slowly, our car got inside the parking lot and got an empty slot, but since the car was super dirty. My mom and I decided to go to the carwash instead of going to the mall so that trip was all wasted.

2. The rock concert was superb
= That day, a rock concert was held in a stadium and unfortunately I forgot the name of the stadium. So, that day my friend and I went to the rock concert, we bought the festival ticket with our own pocket money. We queued for 2 hours long and we felt that our feet were going to fall off just to buy this ticket. When we get in the stadium, it was all empty. We had a chance to go to the backstage anyways, and believe it or not, we met the artists. We took selcas and so on, my face looked like a complete derp but who cares. An hour later, the concert began and the lights shine on the artists and on my bias too. They shouted to the sky, singing with all their might. My friend and I went home after the concert looking like a seal and clapping our hands. Anyways, the rock concert was superb!

3. The first day of school is always frightening
= Yes, tomorrow's my first day at school in middle school. Ah, today I just woke up in the morning with dark circles under my eyes since i didnt have a good sleep last night, oh yeah, and today is my first day at school. I just remembered and quickly changed my ugly-looking pajamas into the brand-new school uniform. Anyways, when I came to school, and to the class. The teacher asked me to introduce myself infront of the class, for years that had been my weakness. My face looked like a complete derp and geek who was lost ina forest. I was completely blank and slowly the lights of the class shined towards my eyes and i fainted. As you know, the first day of school is always frightening.

4. Learning English is difficult
= Today is my first day of going to my english tuition class near the house next door. The teacher was a canadian and he looked freakin' awesome, I meant like so handsome, when I saw his face, I almost fainted and my face was like completely blank plus I looked like a damn stupid person.All of these times, i thought learning english was easy and I can handle it. I was totally wrong, english is so not my type. You know, my eraser kept on erasing my words that i wrote on my exercise books.Trust me, for me learning english is difficult.

DESCRIPTIVE WRITING

         My name is Caroline Vionyta, people usually call me Viony. I have long hair and I don't wear glasses. I wore braces since last year, my hobbies are drawing, art and craft, swimming and playing basketball. I didn't like having pets because i don't know why too.


          Her name is Caroline Vionyta, we call her Viony. She has long hair, she doesn't wear glasses, she wore braces since last year. She loved drawing, art,crafts, swimming and playing basketball. She didn't like having pets, while all of us loves pets!

The Ghost Story

Viony: A girl was sleeping and then a pretended looking fierce ghost came, but she wasnt           looking since she fell asleep.

Livia: When the girl woke up, the ghost surprised her. She opened her mouth wide as she was scared and surprised.

Helena: The ghost felt it was funny and fun so it kept on surprising the girl.

Audrey J.: The girl pretended to die so that the ghost would leave.

THE STORY OF SAPPHIRE AND THE GUY WHO LEFT

              It was 6.00 on the morning, I was supposed to get up and go to school but i  was still asleep when she suddenly touched me on the back of my neck, when i got up, I saw Sapphire screaming infront of Amber, so I screamed because I was afraid. I thought I dreamt at that time but I wasn't. They were really there, they came to go to school together with me. We went together to school by Sapphire's car and arrived at 07.00 morning. The first lesson was P.E class, we changed our clothes and went to the gym. It was basketball lesson, we played basketball, the ball suddenly went over my head, I was so shocked. It was dismissal time, i went to the laundry to do the social work but Sapphire went to my house and noticed that I went to the laundry. So, she took the shortcut because its the best solution to reach the laundry fast. 

             At first, i thought it was something important until she took shortcuts to see me. But, she was just talking about the handsome guy, she saw him walking into the parking garage across her house. I found out it was uninteresting so i didn't hear her diligently. Instead, i asked her out to the movies, after the movie was over we went to the restaurant, when i ate, she suddenly said that she exchanged phone numbers and that she would faint if he ever calls. I went home shaking and I still couldn't sleep eventhough I counted sheeps beacsue of the haunted stories that Sapphire told me. I thought that Sapphire started to love this guy, the next day in school, i saw Sapphire smiling by herself all day long.

             The next day, she met me at the laundry and cried, i was really confused. I saw her dog sat by the broken plate and licked the crumbs and saw her depressed. Her brother told me that Sapphire became like this since that night, that night, they said farewell. I knew why she was like this, the boy that she loved was moving to Canada and called Sapphire to say farewell, Amber and I tried to comfort her and she was able to face the truth afterall.

                                                                 - THE END-

Last Kiss - Pearl Jam

              One rainy day, I sat on the edge of my bed, I shed my tears, held my guitar and  decided to tune in.

               I sang: " Where, oh where, can my baby be? The lord took her away from me. She's             gone to heaven so I've got to be good. So, i can see my baby when I leave this world."

Singing with this weak voice coming out from my throat. Oh lord it wouldn't be like this if that night ended with joy. That night, I turned off the car engine and stopped at her house. I knocked the door with a bouquet of lovely flowers and held it softly on my hands. She opened the door with that lovely blue dress that I bought for her yesterday. I held her hands, walking towards the car and didn't realize that it could be our last night together. I opened the door for her, closing it gently and turned on the car engine and drove slowly.

              I sang: " We were out on a date in my daddy's car, we haven't driven very far."

We chatted, laughed and looked at each other's eyes. It was 8 P.M, I didn't want to waste my time so i decided to speed up. In front, showed up a stalled car and its engine was dead. I couldn't brake, so i swerved to the right. I heard the screaming tires and busting glass and the painful scream that I heard last. When i woke up,  i saw my baby, i lifted her head and she said to hold her for a while and we kissed for the last time. Now, she's gone, i can't hold her tight, i lost my love and life that night.

                I prayed: " Please remember me, don't leave me, watch me from up there. Wait for me and always remember that I will always love you, you're my only love, the beautiful girl who always make my heart warm and happy.

                                                                  -THE END-

The Story of Thea -  in sequence order story

              A girl from Indonesia with a black long hair, a pair of silver earrings and a thick blue coat and green long skinny jeans was in Japan during a cold winter day. She sat on a bench near a shopping centre when suddenly someone ran past through her so fast like a wind that made her fell down. This girl's name was Thea, she didn't realize that she was robbed at the first time until she decided to buy Takoyaki on the street. When she was about to pay, she realized that her wallet was gone, credits cards, all of her things were gone! She immediately went to the police station.

             Since she couldn't speak Japanese, she decided to leave the police station and go home to Indonesia with the plane ticket that she bought last night. She went to the airport and saw that it was 13.00, her flight was on 14.00. So she bought mineral water at the cafe with all the money she had left. When it was 13.30,she just realized that her plane ticket was gone, even her passport too! She was so stressed so she went back to Tokyo and sat on the bench again.

             Thea had an idea to sing so that she could earn some money and go back to Indonesia. Good thing she knew and memorized japanese songs, so she sang them and had enough money to buy food. When she was buying Takoyaki, a rich looking man came to her, he was the manager of a famous artist management in Japan, he wanted to recruit Thea as the junior artist in his company. Thea was really happy and agreed to the contract,  she moved to Japan and became a famous artist in Japan, she also made her very first debut that was booming in Japan and to all of Indonesian people.

                                                                    -THE END-