JUNE 03 2014 [NEWS]
" A charity football match of Indonesia against the famous South Korean football player , Park Jisung and his friends was held on the second of July. This football match was held in Indonesia, tickets to watch the match were all sold as Choi Minho, one of the member of famous South Korean boy group under SM Entertainment named SHINee attended the football match as one of the players. Besides that, the arena was also crowded because the members of runningman, a famous South Korean variety show also attended the football match as the players from Park Jisung's team. People were anticipating much from this match as Park Jisung was an ex- Manchester United player however the match was only a charity event so there were no prizes given to the winners. The funds that were collected from the tickets bought by k-pop fans and other people who were watching the match will be used for charity events. A press-con was also held before they started the match."
Wednesday, June 4, 2014
Four paragraph essay (pair) - President Election 2014
-I made this story as a pair with Livia-
Indonesia is a democratic country. Every five years, the position of president is changed. The first ever president of Indonesia was Ir.Soekarno. For the past ten years, Mr Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono better known as SBY had been the president of Indonesia. This year, is the year where fellow Indonesian citizen will need to choose a new candidate as the new president of Indonesia. There are so many candidates this year, including artists and other famous people but mostly are newcomers. There are also many parties that participates in this year's election. The election for for the parties was held in about 9 April 2014 ago and the party named PDIP won the election leading 5 % from the second party candidate.
One of the candidates is Joko Widodo. Joko Widodo better known as Jokowi was the government of Jakarta together with his partner , Basuki better known as Ahok. Jokowi is a member of the party PDIP that won the last legislative election. This year, the head of the party PDIP , Mrs Megawati sent Jokowi as one of the representatives of the party PDIP and as one of the candidates in the president election that will be held during the next 9 July 2014. Jokowi came from Solo, he's a married man with two children, many people said that he became a candidate of the next president election because he did his tasks well as the present government of Jakarta. Jokowi contributed much to the society. Fellow citizens of Jakarta had chosen Jokowi as the best candidate for this years president election. As Jokowi is a low and kind-hearted man, more citizens are supporting him and are voting for him for the 9 July 2014 president election.
Another candidate is Rhoma Irama. Rhoma Irama is the icon of trend pop music called dangdut in Indonesia, it is a music genre originally from Indonesia. His participation as one of the candidates of the president election surprised many people as his occupation right now is a dangdut artist. Lots of people gave negative comments towards Rhoma Irama , "How could a dangdut artist lead our country?" "Our country will probably be a dangdut country then" "Say no to the dangdut icon", many people are giving bad comments about Rhoma Irama as the candidate for the president election. However, those negative comments didn't take down his spirit to become indonesia's president. As the time goes, he gained supporters as there are many dangdut lovers in Indonesia and there are also much of his fans. The gain of supporters makes Rhoma Irama's chances become higher as the new president of Indonesia.
Many people think that this year's election will be a tough one since there are so many candidates and all of them had high chances to win. Indonesian citizens hope that this year's election will go smoothly as this election decides the leader of Indonesia for the next five years. Governments encourages all people to give their votes during the election so that their voices will not be used by others as an act of cheating. Overall, all indonesians hope that whoever got elected as the new president of Indonesia until the year 2019 could lead Indonesia into a better country and better place to live.
Indonesia is a democratic country. Every five years, the position of president is changed. The first ever president of Indonesia was Ir.Soekarno. For the past ten years, Mr Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono better known as SBY had been the president of Indonesia. This year, is the year where fellow Indonesian citizen will need to choose a new candidate as the new president of Indonesia. There are so many candidates this year, including artists and other famous people but mostly are newcomers. There are also many parties that participates in this year's election. The election for for the parties was held in about 9 April 2014 ago and the party named PDIP won the election leading 5 % from the second party candidate.
One of the candidates is Joko Widodo. Joko Widodo better known as Jokowi was the government of Jakarta together with his partner , Basuki better known as Ahok. Jokowi is a member of the party PDIP that won the last legislative election. This year, the head of the party PDIP , Mrs Megawati sent Jokowi as one of the representatives of the party PDIP and as one of the candidates in the president election that will be held during the next 9 July 2014. Jokowi came from Solo, he's a married man with two children, many people said that he became a candidate of the next president election because he did his tasks well as the present government of Jakarta. Jokowi contributed much to the society. Fellow citizens of Jakarta had chosen Jokowi as the best candidate for this years president election. As Jokowi is a low and kind-hearted man, more citizens are supporting him and are voting for him for the 9 July 2014 president election.
Another candidate is Rhoma Irama. Rhoma Irama is the icon of trend pop music called dangdut in Indonesia, it is a music genre originally from Indonesia. His participation as one of the candidates of the president election surprised many people as his occupation right now is a dangdut artist. Lots of people gave negative comments towards Rhoma Irama , "How could a dangdut artist lead our country?" "Our country will probably be a dangdut country then" "Say no to the dangdut icon", many people are giving bad comments about Rhoma Irama as the candidate for the president election. However, those negative comments didn't take down his spirit to become indonesia's president. As the time goes, he gained supporters as there are many dangdut lovers in Indonesia and there are also much of his fans. The gain of supporters makes Rhoma Irama's chances become higher as the new president of Indonesia.
Many people think that this year's election will be a tough one since there are so many candidates and all of them had high chances to win. Indonesian citizens hope that this year's election will go smoothly as this election decides the leader of Indonesia for the next five years. Governments encourages all people to give their votes during the election so that their voices will not be used by others as an act of cheating. Overall, all indonesians hope that whoever got elected as the new president of Indonesia until the year 2019 could lead Indonesia into a better country and better place to live.
Neighbors steal Christmas Decorations
It was Christmas Eve tomorrow and this noon, I will be decorating the house with the christmas decorations.
"Oops, turns out that I had no Christmas decoration left!" I said.
So I started the car's engine and drove to the superstore near the house and I both several kinds of decorations, starting from wreaths and the Christmas tree decorations. I reached house at noon and saw the new neighbor moving her things, she had long brown hair, a tall body and a white skin. I came to her and greeted her.
"Hi there, do you need help?" I asked.
"No thanks, thanks for your offer though,"she answered.
Out of nowhere, she suddenly asked a question to me.
"Whats that on your hand?" she asked curiously.
"Oh, just some decorations that i bought," I answered.
"What kind of decorations?"she asked.
"Christmas! Don't you celebrate it?" I asked.
"Oh, yes, I have to go first then!" she said.
Then, I went to my house and started to decorate the inner and outer part of my house. Then, I decided to go out and bought foods from the restaurant for me to eat. When I reached home and passed the new neighbor's house, I saw the similar wreath as mine hanging on her house's door, I was really confused that time because the wreath that I hanged on the door was also gone, even the other decoration such as the big sock and mini Christmas Tree I put outside and all of these things were outside the neighbor's house! I suddenly had this feeling that she took my decorations, i literally meant like stealing. I was trying to steal the decorations back at night. But, it didn't turned out as I planned, I walked into her front door and she spotted me.
" Oh! Why are you here so late at night?" asked her
" Well, shouldn't I be asking you why these things are on your house?" I asked her
" Hmm, about that, I'm really sorry," she said with a regretful tone
" So you literally stole that?" I asked
" No, my boyfriend came here just now, he really loved Christmas but I haven't bought any decorations so I borrowed your decorations to make him happy, he just went home just now, well, i was just about to return it to you then you came," explained her briefly
" If thats the case, its okay, but try to leave a note at my door if you wanted to borrow something when i'm not at home, kay?" I said
" Okay then, thank you for your understanding!" she thanked me
So, i took my decorations back and place it at the door. This Christmas went as I wanted, it went peacefully and happily together with my family also together with my neighbor's Christmas celebration.
"Oops, turns out that I had no Christmas decoration left!" I said.
So I started the car's engine and drove to the superstore near the house and I both several kinds of decorations, starting from wreaths and the Christmas tree decorations. I reached house at noon and saw the new neighbor moving her things, she had long brown hair, a tall body and a white skin. I came to her and greeted her.
"Hi there, do you need help?" I asked.
"No thanks, thanks for your offer though,"she answered.
Out of nowhere, she suddenly asked a question to me.
"Whats that on your hand?" she asked curiously.
"Oh, just some decorations that i bought," I answered.
"What kind of decorations?"she asked.
"Christmas! Don't you celebrate it?" I asked.
"Oh, yes, I have to go first then!" she said.
Then, I went to my house and started to decorate the inner and outer part of my house. Then, I decided to go out and bought foods from the restaurant for me to eat. When I reached home and passed the new neighbor's house, I saw the similar wreath as mine hanging on her house's door, I was really confused that time because the wreath that I hanged on the door was also gone, even the other decoration such as the big sock and mini Christmas Tree I put outside and all of these things were outside the neighbor's house! I suddenly had this feeling that she took my decorations, i literally meant like stealing. I was trying to steal the decorations back at night. But, it didn't turned out as I planned, I walked into her front door and she spotted me.
" Oh! Why are you here so late at night?" asked her
" Well, shouldn't I be asking you why these things are on your house?" I asked her
" Hmm, about that, I'm really sorry," she said with a regretful tone
" So you literally stole that?" I asked
" No, my boyfriend came here just now, he really loved Christmas but I haven't bought any decorations so I borrowed your decorations to make him happy, he just went home just now, well, i was just about to return it to you then you came," explained her briefly
" If thats the case, its okay, but try to leave a note at my door if you wanted to borrow something when i'm not at home, kay?" I said
" Okay then, thank you for your understanding!" she thanked me
So, i took my decorations back and place it at the door. This Christmas went as I wanted, it went peacefully and happily together with my family also together with my neighbor's Christmas celebration.
Friday, April 18, 2014
"Why Should We Do Our Homework?"
WHY SHOULD WE DO OUR HOMEWORK - FIVE PARAGRAPH ESSAY
The first reason why people should do their homework is because homework acts as practices. It can be used as practices for upcoming tests and it could test our knowledge, to test how far we understand the topic so that we could reflect on ourselves. Besides that, if the homework is done and checked and all the answers are filled with correct ones, that homework can be used as a studying material for our academics.
The second reason why people shouldn't abandon their homework is because doing homework doesn't waste our time badly, instead it wastes our time in a positive way. Instead of playing and doing other useless things, doing homework while treating it as our practices to achieve better fills in our time or schedule more beneficial than playing around. If there's no homework given, then all people would fill their schedule or time with playing games which can make them addicted to it and if they play it everyday, it would affect their grades too.
The third reason why people should do their homework is because homework positively affects peoples future. If we are used to have much work to do from a young age, then we will be used to those and when we meet a problem during our work, like too much assignments to do, then it will not be a problem for us, since we're used to it. Besides that, we will be trained as a discipline and responsible individual for the future as the homework that are given to us has its own due date, so we need to be discipline in doing our homework and be responsible to due it on time. So, by having homework and doing it form young ages, the skills that are trained by having homework makes us more prepared for the future, especially when we're working.
In conclusion, not doing our homework is not recommended because homework has high benefits for us now and for us in the future too. Homework is an assignment or work that we should learn to accept it as a lesson for the future because its beneficial.
Saturday, November 30, 2013
My Dialogue Story
Clarie's life
"Hi, my name is Clarie and I'm going to tell you the story of my life," said Clarie.
No one knew where and when she was born. She lived at an orphanage near the countryside.
Her friends said, " Clarie is so not us, she didnt even know when her birthday was!"
She felt so sad,stressed and un-useful. She had ever commited suicide once, her 'mother' immediately ran to her .
Her 'mom' shouted, " What are you doing, get down or you would be kicked out!"
I had no idea what i was doing and I went down so i didn't suicide.
My one and only ultimate best friend, Liviana said,"It was a relief you didn't jumped down."
I grinned at her and said," Thanks for being my friend."
Liviana answered, "No worries!"
We were both friends for 5 years already. Our relationship became closer and she was like my own sibling. We shared all of our stories together, but 5 years at the orphanage was only fun with Liviana. One day, Liviana and I ran out from the orphanage and a truck came and hit Liviana, she fell down.
Liviana said, "Clarie, don't mind me, go back to the orphanage, do your best, you are my best
sister ever!"
Those were her last words for me.
I said to her, " You will always be my friend and sister!"
Those were my last words to her and I left her alone on the streets.
Now, i felt i was dumb for leaving her like that. I believe Liviana will always see me from up there and wants the best for me. That was my last meeting with Liviana, now i am a succesful lawyer with a graceful heart. And my family that you should know, my beloved sister Liviana and me.
Punctuation and Capitalization
1. Carolyn looked at her plate reluctantly, mashed potatoes with gravy cheese.
She said: "I'm not eating that nasty lunch!"
"If you don't like it, then don't eat it." said Samantha.
She took a big spoon of her lunch.
2. "Hi Tony,"
Tony looked down at his shoes , dug in his toe , and pushed around a pile of dust.
" Hey," he replied.
Katy could tell something was wrong.
She said: "I'm not eating that nasty lunch!"
"If you don't like it, then don't eat it." said Samantha.
She took a big spoon of her lunch.
2. "Hi Tony,"
Tony looked down at his shoes , dug in his toe , and pushed around a pile of dust.
" Hey," he replied.
Katy could tell something was wrong.
Sensory Details Writing
(The stories I wrote is all fiction stories)
Practice 1
1. There was a car on the street
= There was a shiny big new red car that smells like the 'new-car smell' and its engine's sound was really loud and it stopped near the gutter.
2. A cat was sitting on the roof
= There was a dull and dirty looking cat big old cat covered in brown soil and smelled like a rotten fish that was sitting on top of my friend's house's roof.
3. The little girl smiled at me
= A pretty,bright and gorgeous looking little girl that wore a really cute red hoodie and pink boots that smelled like roses smiled at me while i was queueing at the supermarket's cashier.
Practice 2
1.The car was dirty
= That day, my mom and I went to the mall by a car. The main road to the mall was crowded so we took the shortcut. I knew passing the shortcut would be a bad thing, so when we passed the shortcut, suddenly a lot of cars were queueing to enter the mall too, the shortcut was worst than the main road, it was really soily , the car became so dirty, dirty like a pig that rolled on the soil. And slowly, our car got inside the parking lot and got an empty slot, but since the car was super dirty. My mom and I decided to go to the carwash instead of going to the mall so that trip was all wasted.
2. The rock concert was superb
= That day, a rock concert was held in a stadium and unfortunately I forgot the name of the stadium. So, that day my friend and I went to the rock concert, we bought the festival ticket with our own pocket money. We queued for 2 hours long and we felt that our feet were going to fall off just to buy this ticket. When we get in the stadium, it was all empty. We had a chance to go to the backstage anyways, and believe it or not, we met the artists. We took selcas and so on, my face looked like a complete derp but who cares. An hour later, the concert began and the lights shine on the artists and on my bias too. They shouted to the sky, singing with all their might. My friend and I went home after the concert looking like a seal and clapping our hands. Anyways, the rock concert was superb!
3. The first day of school is always frightening
= Yes, tomorrow's my first day at school in middle school. Ah, today I just woke up in the morning with dark circles under my eyes since i didnt have a good sleep last night, oh yeah, and today is my first day at school. I just remembered and quickly changed my ugly-looking pajamas into the brand-new school uniform. Anyways, when I came to school, and to the class. The teacher asked me to introduce myself infront of the class, for years that had been my weakness. My face looked like a complete derp and geek who was lost ina forest. I was completely blank and slowly the lights of the class shined towards my eyes and i fainted. As you know, the first day of school is always frightening.
4. Learning English is difficult
= Today is my first day of going to my english tuition class near the house next door. The teacher was a canadian and he looked freakin' awesome, I meant like so handsome, when I saw his face, I almost fainted and my face was like completely blank plus I looked like a damn stupid person.All of these times, i thought learning english was easy and I can handle it. I was totally wrong, english is so not my type. You know, my eraser kept on erasing my words that i wrote on my exercise books.Trust me, for me learning english is difficult.
Practice 1
1. There was a car on the street
= There was a shiny big new red car that smells like the 'new-car smell' and its engine's sound was really loud and it stopped near the gutter.
2. A cat was sitting on the roof
= There was a dull and dirty looking cat big old cat covered in brown soil and smelled like a rotten fish that was sitting on top of my friend's house's roof.
3. The little girl smiled at me
= A pretty,bright and gorgeous looking little girl that wore a really cute red hoodie and pink boots that smelled like roses smiled at me while i was queueing at the supermarket's cashier.
Practice 2
1.The car was dirty
= That day, my mom and I went to the mall by a car. The main road to the mall was crowded so we took the shortcut. I knew passing the shortcut would be a bad thing, so when we passed the shortcut, suddenly a lot of cars were queueing to enter the mall too, the shortcut was worst than the main road, it was really soily , the car became so dirty, dirty like a pig that rolled on the soil. And slowly, our car got inside the parking lot and got an empty slot, but since the car was super dirty. My mom and I decided to go to the carwash instead of going to the mall so that trip was all wasted.
2. The rock concert was superb
= That day, a rock concert was held in a stadium and unfortunately I forgot the name of the stadium. So, that day my friend and I went to the rock concert, we bought the festival ticket with our own pocket money. We queued for 2 hours long and we felt that our feet were going to fall off just to buy this ticket. When we get in the stadium, it was all empty. We had a chance to go to the backstage anyways, and believe it or not, we met the artists. We took selcas and so on, my face looked like a complete derp but who cares. An hour later, the concert began and the lights shine on the artists and on my bias too. They shouted to the sky, singing with all their might. My friend and I went home after the concert looking like a seal and clapping our hands. Anyways, the rock concert was superb!
3. The first day of school is always frightening
= Yes, tomorrow's my first day at school in middle school. Ah, today I just woke up in the morning with dark circles under my eyes since i didnt have a good sleep last night, oh yeah, and today is my first day at school. I just remembered and quickly changed my ugly-looking pajamas into the brand-new school uniform. Anyways, when I came to school, and to the class. The teacher asked me to introduce myself infront of the class, for years that had been my weakness. My face looked like a complete derp and geek who was lost ina forest. I was completely blank and slowly the lights of the class shined towards my eyes and i fainted. As you know, the first day of school is always frightening.
4. Learning English is difficult
= Today is my first day of going to my english tuition class near the house next door. The teacher was a canadian and he looked freakin' awesome, I meant like so handsome, when I saw his face, I almost fainted and my face was like completely blank plus I looked like a damn stupid person.All of these times, i thought learning english was easy and I can handle it. I was totally wrong, english is so not my type. You know, my eraser kept on erasing my words that i wrote on my exercise books.Trust me, for me learning english is difficult.
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